Wednesday, February 2, 2011

An Amazing City

                 In my opinion, Al Khober is an amazing city in Saudi Arabia, it is the most important city on the eastern region because It is known for the malls which are in there such as: Al Dahran Mall,
  Al Rashed Mall, Al Khober Mall and  Jumaah Center, if you visite Al Khober you should go to the  beaches like Korneche Al Khober and Alaziziah beach. Al Khober has a money entertainment places such as: Prince Sauod Bin Glowey, Toy Town and Games village, we can see a good restaurants at Al Khober such as: La gondola, Chilis, Coper shandani, Oliv Garden, and Al Tanour restaurant . For all these places, I like Al Khober.   
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4 comments:

  1. iman aliFebruary 3, 2011 at 8:53 PM

    hi ghadeer
    good choice, I think you dont have mistake

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  2. JeffFebruary 3, 2011 at 10:09 PM

    Wow, you have Chilis and Olive Garden in Saudi Arabia? I wonder if they're the same as in Canada. It sounds like there's lots of great shopping too!

    Corrections: Use a period to separate sentences with different ideas. Ex: "In my opinion, Al Khober is an amazing city in Saudi Arabia. It is the most important city on the eastern region because it is known for..."

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  3. khaled-alshareefFebruary 3, 2011 at 11:03 PM

    Hi Ghadeer,
    I think you have one mistake ( Al Khober has a money entertainment places such as:)
    many not money
    and you don't have to use (:) after such as
    GOOD JOB keep going

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  4. GhadeerFebruary 4, 2011 at 6:24 AM

    Thank you every body for comments :)
    ..
    Jeff:Yes,we have these restaurants in Saudi Arabia..

    I'll be careful about the mistakes in the next tme..

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